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Sunshine Hotel, which is an international three – star standard integrated foreign tour hotel, is located on North Road,beijing City, which is the most prosperous political, commercial and financial center of the city. It is an ideal place in south of Beijing for tour, shopping, accommodation, dining, drinking, leisure and entertainment.
The 19-story building with a total area of 24,000 square meters has 5 meeting rooms, 1 video conference room, 1 luxury reception room, 1 multifunctional hall and 8 restaurants; each restaurant has its own style and size. The entertainment center located on the 1 floor underground has 19 luxury KTV rooms with different size. The building around the hotel, which is called Jingbailong business club, is the largest entertainment paradise with all kinds of services in Baoding area. The hotel has 157 rooms including president suit, luxury suit, standard room and single room. All rooms are furnished with internet access programme-controlled telephone, cable TV, etc.

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1.Capitalize Beijing.
2.Change “1 floor” to “1st floor”.
3.Change “different size” to “different sizes”.
4.Capitalize “Internet”.
5.Change “programme-controlled telephone” to “program-controlled telephone”.

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